Today, I read how Cassie and Mr.Mullaney got together better then they did before. Also I read how Mr.Mullaney and Cassie went over Cassie's paper. Cassie said that Mr.Mullaney is evil and that his eyes were blazing with evil. Cassie thought that she was going to scream when Mr.Mullaney said that he needed to see her again and he wanted to just tell her that she had no more if her cat story done.And she was surprised that he even wanted to see it. Now that Cassie was in trouble because of lying she could not go to the party on Saturday. She was sad because Danny could now not take her.
she Danny could not take her. And she was sad.
Did you proofread what you had written? I was very confused and could not follow your train of thought. I also believe you have quite a few sentence structure errors. Please make sure you are rereading what you write. Also you have a few errors with your punctuation when you write Mr. Mullaney's name...You did not put a space after the period...where it is needed.
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