I realized that I did not do a space after Mr. Mullaney's name. Here is my example of using correct punctuation. Cassie went to Mr. Mullaney's class to correct her paper. My sentences also got words that I meant to exchange with other words that is why you did not understand. Here is my example of better structure. Here is my first sentence. I like do play after recess. Here is the first sentence all fixed up. I like to play at recess.
Today, I read how Lucy and Jack were talking deep into the night. Jack knew that Lucy did not understand because she was his little sister. They were just talking about Jack's plans of finding the Sea of Trolls. She just wanted to tell him about her and how she is a princess living in a castle. He was amazed that she was not scared of Trolls. She said that it sounded scary but she did not care. He was happy that he and Bard where getting closer to the Sea where the Trolls lay in boats waiting for all who entered. Lucy fell asleep and Bard told Jack about all of adventures he had went on. Jack was very sleepy and before he went to sleep he said "When I get up we better be there,".
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